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This response of no less than 400 words evaluates the work done by a peer. Consider how effectively the essay: addresses all aspects of the prompt; provides a specific, relevant thesis; supports the thesis with relevant evidence and detailed, explanatory commentary; demonstrates capable writing with academic vocabulary and varied sentence structure; evidences a sense of the writer’s style (the writing does not feel formulaic or forced). I encourage you also to mark the draft itself, but this is not the focus of our feedback (maybe mark only confusing areas or simple fixes).


Bring in TWO copies: one for me and one for the essay’s author.


Earlier Event: September 14
Sackboy & Sonic Present Lit Devices
Later Event: September 24
Their Eyes Q3 Assignment